This story wreaks of a narrative Quest game, even before I read the description haha. I really enjoyed the setting and world you built up here in a short time.

Well written other than a couple grammatical errors. Great world building, and you did stick to the theme. However, nit to be rude, but it does feel like a cop-out to have the name of the story, the beginning of the story, and then end of the story, all be the theme word for word. Nevertheless, well written!

It was a very fun setting. You don’t see many knights on ships. I enjoyed the addition of the angel. Naming the theme in the title and at the end of the story is somewhat taboo.

Nice world building

Nice world building