Something to consider, especially in very short stories like these, is to only weave in details about the characters' appearance when most relevant. You want to get into the core of the story as soon as possible, going over too much detail beforehand can hinder that.
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The Story of Heroes's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Originality | #11 | 3.429 | 3.429 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #13 | 3.143 | 3.143 |
| Overall | #16 | 3.095 | 3.095 |
| Enjoyment | #18 | 2.714 | 2.714 |
Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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