The ending cracked me up. It felt like a realistic portrayal of a couple in this type of situation, with the not-so-romantic interruptions. Also, fun to see the creative uses of BenyDanette's photos!

Even if it's not directly linked to the shuffle comp, it's super touching that you used some of my photos, it gave me goosebumps.

The story is great, the alternation of points of view is fluid, in short I love it.

Very cool and fun way to interpret the song! I love the characterization of "Lola" and "Joseph" and the way their personas contrast with their real personalities.  The POV switching works well in this story, and the font changes make it easy to read without getting confused. I'll make more comments on the seeds when it's SeedComp voting time 💜

I like the look of the pages, how the pictures signify the scenes, the usage of sound effects, and the humor. The usage of the song is top-notch, as well.

The reason I gave this a 4 instead of a 5 is because it's not my taste. But overall, it is a good game.