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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Was the improvement accomplished | #1 | 4.025 | 4.500 |
| How sufficient was the improvement | #3 | 3.578 | 4.000 |
| Does the improvement move game in the right direction | #3 | 3.578 | 4.000 |
| How creative was the improvement | #4 | 3.130 | 3.500 |
| Overall | #4 | 3.488 | 3.900 |
| Was the improvement free from bugs | #5 | 3.130 | 3.500 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Describe the improvement that you have been working for this jam
Additional choices and dialogue. Most menu choice had 2-3 choices, this has been increased to 3-4. Outlined in devlog.
Describe your game in one sentence
Visual novel and romance.
What feedback are you looking for
Nothing specific
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Hey I gave the game a play! The art and the vibes are really nice and relaxing. Here are a few notes I had
--Typo for Assist "Moe"
--It gave me a different name than I clicked (I tried Aiden and it put Arthur)
--Sometimes the music switches are a bit sudden. maybe these could be faded in and out?
--This might be by design, but there doesn't seem to be any conflict in the story? It could make things more interesting? Otherwise it seemed like most of the areas and story elements were pretty similar to each other. I guess that would be at the expense of the relaxing vibe though.
Thanks. I'll fix the typos. I can't remember why I did not apply the fadein fadeout to the music here, but I'll probably add it.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback.
I really like the art and the mood, and the low-key mechanics around energy and memories fit really well :)
The choices you added seem helpful, but I did choose the name Aidan and get Arthur instead at the beginning, so small bug.
Thanks for catching that. But I'll probably fix it once the voting is done.