Got the second ending :) I am curious about what could I possibly offer to the altar

Story is well written, it is evident that you have some experience with storytelling. So far I have reached one ending, but I am tempted to try another.

Music fits very well and I love how it changes dynamically based on the scene.

I also appreciate you spend time on save system.

Nice job!

Love the story! 

Congrats on submitting your game to the jam!

I really like the writing style here and the whole thing is packed with action, which I do enjoy. Music is decent and compliments the narrative well without encroaching too much on the reader. Found the odd typo - I think it was 'tumblr' when you meant 'tumble' but nothing major at all so good job on that.

I am resisting the temptation to save and just choosing things that I myself would choose to do were I in the witches shoes (spoiler - it's not going too well for me!)

I would love to play more and explore some different choices - it's an interesting and absorbing game loop you have going here, but time is limited and I have to try out everyone's games too.

All in all a nice immersive experience. Thanks for making  the game and sharing!