The idea is nice but it requires a bit (maybe not a bit) polishing, the layers of delay do be hitting the vibe of the jam, but they surely need some variation imo. verygj anyway

I feel the melody is a bit too repetitive especially when you take out some of the spaces between the phrases. I think in general, the track could use more “space”. You have this nice wash-y pattern repeating, but then the melody is kinda right in your face and a bit too active. I would slow down the melodic movement, decrease the number of repetitions and maybe add some more delay/reverb on the melody or tone down the high end a bit. I like the repeating pattern for the accompaniment, but you could also vary that a little throughout the track potentially