The main character was very relatable XD The scenario was funny and I appreciated the different endings!
Lily

Fun visual novel that's just the right length for a game jam! With 72 games to play, I'm grateful for tight, fun experiences.

And this definitely fits that description! The story was enjoyable, the music and SFX all worked well, and the original artwork was a good! I loved the surprise transformation at the end, hehe. I also liked how you worked the rhythm game section in. I enjoy VNs, but I'll always prefer ones that have mini-games and other activities mixed into the story.

Great work! Here's to Chapter 2!

Short and funny VN with a small rhythm game section, good job! Extra kudos for not making it hours long ¦3

The animations and transitions are nicely done. The drawings are a bit simplistic, but they are all consistent to the game style.

Music selection is also pretty good. Sometimes the same music could restart from the beginning, and loops are not perfect, but these are all minor things.

Making a rhythm game is hard, and even if you picked the right tech for the job, I think the hardest part is to make the actual mapping of expected inputs to match the song. You can try recording yourself table drumming the rhythm section in the game, and then check how that recording fits the music.

Good effort, it was fun to see all 3 endings!