This is great. Such a calming track.

This is cool! I liked the bass, good job!

Great track. I think the bass up front is a really interesting choice. I just feel you could have taken more advantage of my ears being drawn to it. The bass feels a little repetitive. Really great composition. Just needed a better touch on mixing. 

I actually really like the mix having the bass up front! I think it creates a rather interesting effect on the melody!

It really feels like it would fit a short dream sequence in something which is cool!

good job!

Interesting stylistic choice to have the bass up front like this. I feel like it takes all my focus after a certain point and causes me to focus entirely on it, and its a bit repetitive. If that were different this would be such a solid track bro.

Overall really solid track, a little hard to hear the actual composition in the mix but I can tell it's there.

Really great use of texture and atmosphere as well.