The little ostinato at 1:35 is really nice. I like the bells later in the track, though the chord that comes after they come in maybe sounds slightly random.

Some of the mix is a little squished. It's some cool textures you've used.

Good job overall! :)

Good ambience, very intriguing!

Really liked the ambience portrayed in your piece! Sound selection were great, (Especially love the pad at around 1 minute) but I think some stood out a bit too much against the underlying pieces. Such as the section starting at 2:40, where the the idea is great but could blend in with the prior section in a cleaner way. You set up a lovely space with the introduction of the synth at 2:24 and its little additions until 2:40 but the bell sound that comes in there seems a bit too distinct from the rest of it and felt a bit jarring. 

Each section is distinct with its own melody and vibe and serves to offer a point in the journey but would be great to hear a bit more about what they represent, and somewhat hard to link that back to the original prompt sometimes as it seems to be more focused on the lighthouse instead of the far reaches theme. 

All in all, great work with some minor nit picks, and would love to hear more!

interesting layout! definitely room for improvement in the sounds (the resonating pad that begins at 0:57 gets a bit loud by 1:21. maybe it could be widened spatially? i feel like it could use more high end but its muffly sound might be intentional). 

composition-wise it's interesting if a bit patient. i think i was supposed to understand some larger story throughout the piece, but i never did, even aided by the descriptions. for a piece that seems to have many separate story beats, i'd appreciate a more detailed explanation of what each part means :)

Solid solid mixing! Composition was good but I can't seem to relate this to the theme :/

But the song is good man, great ambience! I think the next jam will be right up your alley!

Also PT or BR?

Take care :D

I like your work on sound design, it really sets a strange and lonely feeling, my favorite track was the last one

I'm confused about the origins of this track, you say it's inspired by something entirely different than this jam? Does that imply you've had this track in the works since before the jam? 

Either way, it's certainly off theme and lacks correlation, and while it's mixed well it's more of a solid ambient piece than a composed OST piece.