Interesting use of the medium here. The idea of resetting into a time loop fits the theme of the Jam really well too! A twine game that sends you back in time is a cool concept for a primary mechanic.

I really liked how this game gave off ominous noir kind of vibes. It almost felt like the character was stuck in some time loop and that no matter what they did, they would always end up back at that platform. The background added to the game's overall vibe, and I really liked the narrative. The game was a good length, and it was easy to replay it a view times through the choices. Awesome work!

Really interesting concept! Reminded me a lot of the Kisaragi Station urban legend. I liked the descriptions for each option, they had a noir vibe to them. I'm a sucker for a taxi that reeks of stale cigs, my kinda jam. 

I really liked the atmosphere and how you incorporated the theme! If I could make one suggestion I would say to have the choices loop more seemlessly rather than returning to the title screen each time, I think that would really add to the effect. :)