Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous.
GDD:
GDD seems somewhere good.
Good with the images in the game mechanics section, but I recommend using your own gifs/images from your game that give context to GDD. Not Mass flux images.
Perhaps showcase more art in the art section. Like the UI and your thoughts on the pixel art design.
Good to add a development timeline. It would showcase transparency of the game's state and progress. It gives so much value to the GDD.
Game:
I think the main menu seems fine. Could be funny if the UI in the main menu actually gets thrown out as an animation.
Nice to see settings, but think it could be improved with accessibilities settings and perhaps some gameplay settings, which would probably require a page than the current function.
I feel like the drag and click are slow to react. Sometimes the drag works or the click is too slow.
I think the game concept would be more clever if it was in a puzzle genre with no enemies or time rush. But it is also interesting that it is in this kind of genre too!
The art looks great and I think the game itself needs much more art & UI to look complete, but so far all pieces of the pixel art look well together.
Link to your Game Design Doc on Google Drive.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FuEkcx61LzxZHSbkIDtCvgR28rYJ1KHuSl6BWJUY-bA/edit?usp=sharing
Have you checked that your GDD is publicly accessible ?
Yes
Is your game set to public on itch.io so we can see it?
Yes
Summarise your game!
You throw your UI to kill enemies and defend the Debug Core in a pixel art style! Use your mouse to fling UI objects in an increasingly difficult 10 wave defense!
Please explain how your game fits the theme:
Usually, the UI is only ever seen or acknowledged by the living human controlling the player character. This means that using the UI as the main weapon is something that only the living human behind the screen can do, not someone in-world. A living person must act to be the weapon.
Is there anything you'd like the judges to pay particular attention to?
This was my first time doing actual music or attempting to do pixel art. Any feedback is appreciated!
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