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Prophet of Metal, Flesh and Hope's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #25 | 3.727 | 3.727 |
| Overall | #42 | 3.030 | 3.030 |
| Adherence to Theme | #43 | 2.864 | 2.864 |
| Flow & Clarity | #46 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This gets the highest score I’ve given for originality.
I loved the premise so much.
Unfortunately, points had to be taken off for the clarity.
Still, it was a good time.
Thank you, very appreciated.
I can't say it does much for the main theme, nor does it maintain clarity very well, but there's something here. There's a strong idea that could/should be further explored.
Thank you for commenting. I expect that clarity to be my weakest point, no surprise there, about the theme I expected to have achieved better, but well, I'll have to work more.
If you are interested to check them, I tried to link all my submissions in different opr writing jam, if loosely, in a "meta-theme", . Although i am afraid they could be even less clear to follow.
The theme & imagery are really strong - I love the concept of a grimdark cyborg struggling to consume enough to compensate for its continual decay. I think the narrative is rather difficult to follow, though - perhaps it's a symptom of the prophet's descent into madness?
Thank you. You are too kind, I am afraid clarity in English texts is difficult for me.
A gripping tale that showcases the Prophet’s relentless persistence, evolution, and ultimate transformation from decay into something greater. Love the grimdark theme!
Thank you
The protagonist’s relentless hunger, the engineer’s slow descent into madness, and the looming promise of singularity create a very good journey.
Thank you
I think your upload was lost!
Thank you, the file was left hidden for some reason. Just corrected it.