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The Thieves' Art's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #40 | 2.924 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #48 | 2.753 | 2.825 |
| Concepts & Originality | #49 | 2.975 | 3.053 |
| Adherence to Theme | #50 | 2.360 | 2.421 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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It's clear that the noble isn't the main character, but she does get a lot of the very limited screen time for this not really being her story.
Some excellent world building here.
just looking for clarification, the adults disagreement was the creative resource? Overall it seems like the start of something that could easily be expanded upon.
Thanks for reading and replying!
Yep that’s correct! I didn’t want to be too in your face with the theme. But if I’m thinking about the lore for the human empire I tried to imagine the sort of thing a noble may see as a way to get a win over the guilds.
Overall, this was an enjoyable read. I could see this as a scene in something larger, but it felt a bit too safe. There was nothing that made me overtly think “One Page Rules” or “Creative Resources”.
Thanks for reading and thanks for the feedback!