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The Igniting Spark's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #1 | 4.429 | 4.429 |
| Overall | #3 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Concepts & Originality | #7 | 4.048 | 4.048 |
| Flow & Clarity | #20 | 3.524 | 3.524 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Excellent use of the theme, and great atmosphere building over such a short span. I liked everything about this.
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Savage ScalesExcellent use of the theme, and great atmosphere building over such a short span. I liked everything about this.
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Savage ScalesI think it needed more time to build up the intrigue it could've had based on the concept, but I suppose that's the limitation of the writing jam. It very much feels like the prelude to a grander story.
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Function Over FormThis was great! Loved the concept and snapshot of the scene. Well written and enjoyable to follow!
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DissentigrationInteresting plot twist, but the narrative could be clearer, at the end specially.
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Prophet of Metal, Flesh and HopeThe moment where the saurian explained his plan, was such a cool aha! moment.
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Me'kah AxolotlsThe story was interesting, but I am not exactly sure what happened at the end. I do dig the idea of the Saurian using his own starvation to initiate his salvation. Very cool turnabout.
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The Rickety Rocket
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