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The Tool at Hand's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #11 | 3.745 | 3.842 |
| Overall | #28 | 3.471 | 3.561 |
| Concepts & Originality | #31 | 3.540 | 3.632 |
| Adherence to Theme | #36 | 3.129 | 3.211 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I enjoyed it! My main criticism was going to be that you sort of repeated information between dialog and character thoughts but the main example I went to use was Charlette's considering killing the necromancer- but that turned out differently than I expected haha, well done. other than that, I would have suggested spending more time building up/waking up the necromancer by starting the characters out in the second village to begin with- only because of the page limit
Great read! Extremely well paced, would love to read more adventures of these two.
Check out the OPR Writing Jam #9. Blood Feast is the first story featuring them.
I should have assumed a gold covered church would be the work of the God of lust. Really like how you subverted expectations. I wonder what they will do now without that necromancer.
Ouch… Killed by a… Tool. Nice play on words, and a good little story. I enjoyed it, and can’t find anything to pull apart. Good job.