Play book
The Last Batch's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #28 | 3.429 | 3.429 |
| Concepts & Originality | #35 | 3.524 | 3.524 |
| Overall | #35 | 3.286 | 3.286 |
| Flow & Clarity | #41 | 2.905 | 2.905 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The first part left me a little lost and I found it difficult to follow but the second half hooked me immediately.
I personally got a little lost at the end but all in all a good write up, and great use of dialogue.
You slipped between present and past tense a couple of times but other than that it read alright. It can be really hard to manage telling vs showing with a multiple day story inside a short word count but I appreciate that you didn't let it it get bogged down in details
A fun read. Good job on sticking with the given theme, there's at least 3 significant uses of creative resources going on there!
It’s a really good investigation. Kept me on my toes good job. Didn’t realize he was a jackle. LOL. the ending was pretty funny too.