Play book
MISSION ACCOMPLISHED - OPR writing Jam #12's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #2 | 4.174 | 4.174 |
| Overall | #10 | 3.841 | 3.841 |
| Adherence to Theme | #13 | 3.913 | 3.913 |
| Flow & Clarity | #24 | 3.435 | 3.435 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I really liked the "otherness" of the main character. It added a feel to the psyhackers that we haven't really seen yet, while clearly existing in the OPR universe. Nice work!
Yeah, that's perfect scores across the board. Not perfect in terms of it being a perfect story, but in each of the jam's categories it excels. Best I've read so far, though the technical formatting could use some improvements. I think our heroine here might be a bit... godmodded, but hey not that far out of left field for what you can get out of GF's lore. If this was starquest, that feels like a fully leveled character.
Great story and lovely use of the theme
I really like the ideas and concepts behind this one, though I do feel like it can use some additional editing passes to get it to the final draft. I feel like some of the dialogue can be reworked, as well as some exposition changes, but overall, I enjoyed this one!
Valid, it Probably suffered form a considerable cut to get it to the word count then again into the template. I was trying to keep the main ideas alive thanks for the comment!
I don’t really go for psyker stuff, but this was interesting nonetheless. Another good “Improvise, adapt, overcome” story with an ending that doesn’t strain the mind with incredulity. Good job.