Play OPR Writing Jam
For Clan and Forge's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #25 | 3.400 | 3.400 |
| Adherence to Theme | #31 | 3.300 | 3.300 |
| Overall | #37 | 3.200 | 3.200 |
| Concepts & Originality | #50 | 2.900 | 2.900 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I liked it the first time you used the phrase "creative resources" in the story, the second time was a bit much.
Nice entry, thank you for your work!
Enjoyable read. Thanks for submitting!
I really liked the story and the Dwarven ideology throughout. The literal use of "creative resources" twice was a bit heavy handed, though.
Really good flow and an enjoyable read. Feels like it could have been a professional propaganda excerpt, and I mean that in the best way
Overall, an enjoyable read! Definitely written well grammatically and structurally; however, I feel like the exposition and “world-building” portions could’ve been interwoven differently to make it feel more like a part of the short story rather than trying to share external info to the reader. “Creative resources” came through well, though!
Rock and Stone! Controlled cave ins are certainly one way to kill some bugs!
Pretty good. Excellent use of the mining shafts. Also great for holding the tone all the way through.