This is a great attempt for only your second game. The biggest improvement for the game would be feedback: feedback on when I hit enemies, including sounds, animations, screen shakes, etc. 

Good foundations. Could really benefit from a bit more atmosphere. Some fog and lighting effects could go a long way to upping the spooky vibes. Game feel was a bit stiff, the combat especially needs some player feedback. I couldn't tell if I was doing anything to the enemies at first. Was a nice surprise seeing a cutscene thrown in! I think this shows alot of potential, it requires some more polish. Only bug I noticed was the camera clipping through walls a bit, but I know thats not an easy thing to fix especially in so short a time.