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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Fit | #22 | 2.635 | 2.778 |
| Appeal | #26 | 1.792 | 1.889 |
| Uniqueness | #27 | 2.424 | 2.556 |
| Overall | #27 | 2.284 | 2.407 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I kinda love it actually
Nice melodies and vibe! I think you could work more on the synth sounds, using maybe some vsts with more texture.
It's a sweet little melody! There is one exotic thing though that kind of surprised me, and maybe that was your intention, but : You seemed to start in the key of G-major, with a little melody with a good bass, that's alright. But then from the 9th second, when you do the rundown from A to A an octave down, you're playing an F and not a F#, which would make it G mixolydian. Nothing wrong with that, but when you have the expectation of G major, that F (third note in the rundown from 00:09, as well as 00:45 ) sounds really dissonant to me.
So if you'd like to do an experiment you could switch out that F for an F# and see how that sounds. Nice work !
Some nice melody moments in the piano.