The game is fun! Especially for a first game, this is real good. As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:

• The best part about the game for me, is the audio. It was funny, and I just love hearing the sheep go "BAAAAA"
• I loved the visuals. The character looked great, along with the sheep.
• The level design and the game loop is simple, and I'm glad you've made a tutorial too.
• One suggestion I have is on the main menu. I would recommend creating a UI, with a proper 3D scene in the background. You can use the 3d models in the game, with the UFOs and a bunch of sheep to create a dynamic UI.
• I would also recommend adding sound effects for the UI elements as well.
• What you have here is a solid groundwork for more additions and mechanics to be expanded upon, and that is great.

Once the jam ends, I would recommend to continue working on the game and add more crazy things.

Overall, it was fun, and the sheep sometimes simply follows me, which adds to the chaos. Good job!

By the way, here is my silly little game. It would be helpful if you could play, rate and give feedback! Thanks!

Hi! I loved the game. I loved the mystery-unknown-trapped vibe that it gave me. And I'm glad you are committed to make this a bigger and better experience. Because this game is not so much mechanical, but more about the story, the events, and things happening in the game, my thoughts are more focussed on that as well. So, here are my thoughts:

• I wonder if I never break rule 1, what would happen? That's the first thought that came to my mind after breaking rule 1.
• The game visuals were really good. I love psychological horror stuff, and it has a good creepy vibe to it.
• Certain elements felt bizarre. The ghosts appearing didn't make sense to me. It wish that part was introduced slower, maybe with one ghost, and then more appearing one after the other. Perhaps, you find something on the right most side of the platform, and then a ghost just swiftly rushes through the character, decreasing the sanity. Then perhaps a follow up dialogue: What was that? 
• This is just a suggestion, a part of me wants the character to have a handicap, like a broken arm, or something like that. This adds depth, to perhaps some event that happened. The reason I am suggesting that is because, there's a ton of 2D characters I've seen that looks like an average office worker. Because you are so committed to the game, it would be great if the character has some traits that stand out. And handicaps work well, as it resonates immediately with the person playing the game. Perhaps the character is walking on crutches, and the whole situation makes it feels like he is helpless. I don't know. I feel like the protagonist is "missing" something. It's just my opinion.
• When it comes to the story, I feel like a you need to give a faint introduction to the player, for them to figure it out on their own. If you look at games like Five Nights at Freddy's, there's a phone guy who talks with you about the pizzeria, animatronics.. What I'm trying to say is, it lacks the first push, for me to figure out what exactly happened. The paintings on the wall, are great puzzle pieces, but somebody, or something has to put the puzzle box in front of me first, to solve the puzzle. Does that make sense?
• I don't know if I got a proper ending or not, but I got quickly returned to the main menu after the train arrived. Hopefully, everything about the endings will be sorted out.

When it comes to the game,

• It lacked sound effects. Like footsteps were there in the beginning (I think), but it went away after a while.
• I would love to hear sounds of windchimes, or maybe a child crying in the distance, reverbed and reversed so that it doesn't make sense.
• Also, I feel like the Main menu could have been better. Perhaps the menu is just the protagonist and the old guy sitting on the bench, and the protagonist is sleeping. When we hit play, the character wakes up and we are right into the game. Something like that. It's up to you.

Man I'm excited about where this could go. All the best!

By the way, here is the silly little game I made, and I would love for you to play it, and share feedback! Thanks!

I had given a review to this game on this post before. 

In case you missed it, here it is:

INSANITY. That's this game. 

I had real good fun playing the game. Everything was unexpected, and I was always on edge, to see what will happen next. As promised here is my feedback for the game.

• The game is quite innovate, it's fresh, feels good, and quirky. It checks different boxes I didn't know I needed to check.
• The simple gameplay loop is just obstructed (I don't know if that's even a word, but I'm using it for this game) by unending chaos. I love it.
• The visuals were on point. The giant exclamation marks. The mystery of not knowing what this is. The alien invasion beam, and how it sparks curiosity to jump on it. Very well done.
• The audio is fun too. The cough, the glass breaking, the money.
• The lights going off is my favorite.

With what the game presented, it was very well done. I have a bunch of suggestions/ features to think about adding to the idea:

• I wish the zombies could dance, so the player could lead them there to temporarily halt them.
• I don't know why, but for some reason, I want to hear some sheep going "BAAAAA"
• I would love for a reason to earn money. Right now, for the gameplay of this calibre, high-score wouldn't just cut it. (That was a compliment more than a complaint)

These are just some fun ideas. The game is awesome, and you should be proud of what you've made.

By the way, here is my game. It would be great if you could play it and give feedback. It's a game made in 3 days. Thanks!

I have given a review for this game on this post before. 

Just in case you missed it, here it is:

Cool concept. I love the art style, and how consistent it was. The audio was so good, that I hate it. The pacing of the game is very commendable. As promised, here is my detailed review of the game:

• The art style, as mentioned, is really good. The MS Paint vibe was consistent throughout, and it was visually coherent.
• The theme of the game is on par with the jam as well. Things do go wrong!
• I would love for the game to be more balanced. Some mini-games were too difficult to even play. Sometimes you just lose on the spot.
• The sound effects, as much as they are good for the game, they are not good for my sensitive brain. It's just a personal thing. 
• The game had a hidden accelerating effect. This is something that I found interesting. I don't know if this was the intention, but the more you play the game, the more you realize you are terrible at it, and the more you want it to go your way, and you automatically start the slot machine and go again, and lose even more. This is the best part about the game in my opinion. Reminds me of how desperate anyone could get, just to get out of pain and misery. I think you should expand on this concept.
• Everything else about this game is really solid. I just think this needs more balancing, as some minigames are unplayable. (I don't mind games being unfair or difficult, but in some minigames, for example, the one where you get chased by a snake like enemy, the enemy moves too fast for the brain to process what is happening, and then I lose the game.)

Overall, really cool concept. You should definitely expand on this.

I have given a review to this game on this post before. 

In case you missed it, here it is:

Thank you for making this game. The game is simply put - beautiful.

I loved the twist with the theme here. It's a brilliant take on trying to read people, from their words, body language, and expressions. As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:

• The game has a big heart behind it, and it is evident.
• It also conveys a powerful message to the players, and it's all subjective and based on the choices of the ingredients chosen.
• The visuals were amazing, and added to the lonely vibe of hell (Hell here represents the part of people's lives that they think is something that traps them, and something that happens because of them)
• I don't know but there's something "medicinal" about this game, I don't know if that's the way you should put it. It's not healing, but it feels as if you are eating a medicine, knowing that with the right ingredients, you can focus on the flavours that you like.
• From the points above, it may be obvious that I loved the emotional things that this game injects onto it's players, and I believe it is the most important thing here to be discussed.
• From a game developer perspective, I would love to hear more sound effects. The main menu UI buttons needed sounds and scale animations to make it feel good. I would love for sound effects on button clicks in the gameplay. Maybe some drink mixing sounds.
• I would also recommend adding more damage, on mixing wrong emotions. I believe the emotions that we convey, especially through words, yield heavy repercussions in the life of others. Sometimes, our words can go so deep that it can never be taken back. I would love for that in this game. There is only one life, and you can't take back time. This also makes the players understand that every action they take matters. And it is never, ever, small.

Overall, I did not expect the game to feel this way. Consider me emotionalized (I don't know if that's even a word).

Oh by the way, here is my silly game. It would mean a lot if you could play it, whenever you are free, and give me feedback. Thanks!

Really good game! This is an interesting deck-building game. As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:

• Solid gameplay loop. The instructions were clear. The card types and what they do is also not that complicated to understand. I could see potential in this concept to be even bigger in scale, with time and more effort.
• The best part of the game is the gameplay. The simplicity in the mechanics, the snapping of the cards, and luck are all important elements of this game. I enjoyed most of the gameplay. I'd recommend adding difficulty, as it is extremely rewarding, and not that much punishing. Getting the "eye" just makes it too easy.
• I don't exactly know what "syringe" does. It felt more complicated compared to the other buffs. 
• Just from the perspective of the game jam, I would recommending adding more chaos, as it would suit the theme of the jam better. Personally for this game, it is not necessary. But because this is a gamejam, and because of the rules, I recommend adding more things in the game to make it more suited to the theme, just for the gamejam build.
• What the game lacked are quality of life improvements in my opinion. The buttons could be animated just like the cards on hovering over them (mostly because they look alike). I would also recommend adding a sound effect when playing the hover animation. This makes the whole experience more satisfying. I would have loved to hear more sheep, animal sounds, wolf sounds, when the cards are played. 
• I would also recommend adding more visual elements like sheep, or animals in the background, and let them graze on the field a little bit. As long it doesn't get too distracting from the core gameplay, I think it would be a good addition.

Overall, this was a fun little experience. I loved the gameplay and I believe it has great potential to become something even bigger provided more time. Good job!

Oh by the way, here is the silly little game I made. I would love for you to play it and give feedback! Thanks!

I have given a review for this game on this post before. 

In case you missed it, here it is:

This was a fun cute little game! First of all I was blown away by the visuals, and the audio. Really neat job. It gives the game more polish, and made it an enjoyable experience. As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:

• The game has a solid gameplay loop -  you pick the bulb, avoid obstacles, get to the end, repeat. This is a strong foundation to work on. This lays down more groundwork for future levels, and additional mechanics. Good job.
• The visuals and the sound were the best part of the game. The flybot was so cute. The sounds felt delightful.
• The idea in itself has enough potential for something even bigger. For a gamejam, this project is so promising that it has the potential to be a solid commercial game.
• I have some suggestions with the levels. The levels for some reason, felt increasingly easier every level I go up. For me, it was difficult to cross the first level as I always break the bulb. But every other level, I managed to beat without dying. Especially the last level. It became easier to beat. However, the puzzle elements were really good. I wish the levels were a bit more difficult to offer a challenge.
• There were some issues with the WebGL build. Sometimes it gets stuck on the loading screen.
• There were also weird lines being rendered when I move in the WebGL version of the game. I don't know what is triggering this, but you should definitely look into it.
• I would love more things to be added to the game. Like explosive objects with a timer that can be pickedup to destroy walls. Maybe some buttons that need to be held by blocks to keep a door open. Instances where we have to intentionally drop the bulb on a platform so that we have to spend some time without it, only to pick it up later. Stuff like that. Like I said, having a strong gameplay loop is so important. And in the game, you certainly do have it. I would love for it to branch off into all sorts of craziness.

Overall, a really solid fun game. There's huge potential in this idea, and I would encourage you to continue working on this game even after the jam ends. Good job!

By the way, here is my game. I would love for you to play the game, rate it, and give feedback! Thanks!

A solid game, with a fluid gameplay! I loveeeed the movement, the particle effects, the jumping. The core mechanics felt real good. As promised here are my thoughts on the game.

• The game lacked sound effects. I don't know if it was added, but my build did not contain any sound effects. The experience would have been so much more wholesome with good music, and sfx.
• The movement for me was so fluid that it made me jealous. It felt reaaal fluid. The particle effects on moving and jumping felt really great too! 
• I loved the last level. I died a lot of times, not knowing what to do, and I was scratching my head, and the camera started going down, and I was like : Ohhhhhh!
• I wish there were no checkpoints. I would have preferred the game to be more challenging.
• I wish the background was not just solid brown. The tiles had really good texture, and it felt off that the background was just solid. I would have loved to see it of a similar art-style as the tiles.
• I would love for more levels, but hey this is a gamejam, I would recommend you to continue working on the game even after jam, add more levels, make changes, add polish, and the game would be great!

Overall, I had fun playing the game. I just wish it had sound effects, otherwise it would have been a perfect experience. Continue working on the game, and I would love to see it grow. Good job on the jam!

By the way, here is the silly little game I made in 3 days. I hope you'll love it, and give me feedback. Thanks!

Haha, I reviewed this game before. I understand this wasn't intentional. Have a blast.

Good concept! The Hollow Knight  vibes that it produces feels nostalgic. I loved the level design, and the visuals by itself. However, I noticed a few things that could be improved. As promised, here are my thoughts:

• The level design is really good. I loved the platformer elements of it.
• The game needed more sound effects, and particle effects on jumping, movement etc.
• The art on the cutscene and the effects on it felt really good. But it felt like the game did not meet the same level of polish as the cutscene. I would much rather prefer consistent visuals over something imbalanced. The dialogue box on the cutscene felt a bit weird, I would recommend getting rid of the black box, and add bigger font text, perhaps with an outline, and looks cartoony.
  
  For the jam, I would have recommended toning down the quality of the cutscene, and make everything visually balanced. But if you are improving this game, which I think you should, I recommend spending more time with the art, perhaps add more post-processing, add vignette, contrasts, play around with color schemes, to make it coherent as the cutscene (In which the background blew my mind).
  
  The reason I am stressing on this is having a really visually polished cutscene in the intro, creates high expectations. And if the game in itself, isn't anything close to that, the energy goes down subconsciously, and you don't want that in a game.
• Furthermore, if you are expanding on the game, I would recommend adding enemies, more difficulty, and if possible, make the spikes easier to see. I know it can be counter-intuitive to take away challenge, but it works, trust me. Making the spikes more visible will allow the player to take the rest of the beauty of the world in. This makes them feel more connected with the game in itself.
  This also gives us room to add more spikes, and challenges as well. 

I hope you understand that this is feedback, and I will not be dishonest with you. I want to see more better games being added, and I would love for you to continue working on this game. All the best.

Oh by the way, here is the silly little game I made in 3 days for this jam . I would love to hear your thoughts. Thanks.

Cool concept. The whole game was giving me Night of the Museum vibes! As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:

• An interesting take on the theme, and things do go wrong easily, if you are not careful.
• What really stood out were the visuals and the audio. The sound effects on the main menu were really good. I wish it was used in the pause menu as well (I don't remember if it was implemented)
• The voice over was really good. It felt like I was playing Call of Duty or something, but in a museum carrying animals around.
• The game has a really insanely solid gameplay loop. You pickup crazy animals (in order) -> Throw them into the right display -> Repeat. This is a really good and addictive gameplay loop. Now, if you are still deciding to work on the game even after the game jam, I would recommend branching out on this gameplay loop, as you progress through the levels (The first 3 levels (days) which I played, all had a similar loop, which gets boring and repetitive very fast.)
• I would consider thinking of adding more mechanics to the game. Like I said, the loop is really well made. Now you should add flavors to it. 
• The difficulty should be balanced. Once you figure out what you should do, it gets very easy to play the game. I would recommend spawning enemy animals (temporary ones) from time to time to annoy and challenge the player. 
• I would also have loved to hear sound effects of animals, when they get picked up. I want the cow to go: MOOOOOO!!

Overall, this is a fun game, with a solid foundation for you to build upon. I would recommend adding more things, features, and mechanics to the game. 

By the way, here is my silly little game. I would love for you to play it, and give some feedback. Thanks.

This is a good game, and I would love for it to see it grow. The waking up to that muscular man was hilarious.

Sorry, I couldn't play the game before the jam ended, I was on vacation for the last few days of the rating period and there were a ton of requests.

As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:

• The game has a unique feel to it. The atmosphere was good, the visuals were consistent. The "something strange is going on" effect was there. 
• I personally am not a fan of just jumpscares. I understand that this game had to be made quickly, and there was little time. But if you are focusing on building the game even further, I would recommend you to add more interesting experiences, than just jumpscares. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing technically wrong with your jumpscares, but I feel like it's being overused in every horror game and I personally am not a fan of it.
• I would love to hear more sound effects. And more interactions. Like you could flush the toilet, whenever you want. Maybe have a tiny operating system in the computer. You could add story elements here as well. Perhaps pictures of the characters family, or Asbjørn. This makes the player feel more as if they are a part of that world.
• I recommend adding sounds to the Main menu as well, the button sounds, an ambience are all appreciated.
• I also recommend adding ability to skip intro dialogues as well. For people who dies in-game, and wants to get to the game again quickly, this option would save their time a lot. Also sound effects for the dialogues would also be welcomed heartfully

Overall, the game has promise. It needs more time and love, to fully be able to communicate what the game has to tell, and I would really recommend you to continue working on this. Good job on completing the submission, and sorry for not being able to play the game before the jam ended. All the best.

I did give my feedback on the game in this post before. Here it is in case you missed it ;)

Really good game! This is an interesting deck-building game. As promised, here are my thoughts on the game:

• Solid gameplay loop. The instructions were clear. The card types and what they do is also not that complicated to understand. I could see potential in this concept to be even bigger in scale, with time and more effort.
• The best part of the game is the gameplay. The simplicity in the mechanics, the snapping of the cards, and luck are all important elements of this game. I enjoyed most of the gameplay. I'd recommend adding difficulty, as it is extremely rewarding, and not that much punishing. Getting the "eye" just makes it too easy.
• I don't exactly know what "syringe" does. It felt more complicated compared to the other buffs. 
• Just from the perspective of the game jam, I would recommending adding more chaos, as it would suit the theme of the jam better. Personally for this game, it is not necessary. But because this is a gamejam, and because of the rules, I recommend adding more things in the game to make it more suited to the theme, just for the gamejam build.
• What the game lacked are quality of life improvements in my opinion. The buttons could be animated just like the cards on hovering over them (mostly because they look alike). I would also recommend adding a sound effect when playing the hover animation. This makes the whole experience more satisfying. I would have loved to hear more sheep, animal sounds, wolf sounds, when the cards are played. 
• I would also recommend adding more visual elements like sheep, or animals in the background, and let them graze on the field a little bit. As long it doesn't get too distracting from the core gameplay, I think it would be a good addition.

Overall, this was a fun little experience. I loved the gameplay and I believe it has great potential to become something even bigger provided more time. Good job!

Oh by the way, here is the silly little game I made. I would love for you to play it and give feedback! Thanks!