Do you guys proofread game in English?
Hello guys, my name is Flatbert and I'm currently finalizing the demo of my first game (an NSFW adventure visual novel), Forsaken Island.
All the texts in the game were initially written in French and then translated into English by myself with my limited knowledge of the language and the help of DeepL (like this post). I'm reasonably satisfied with the result, but I'm sure that many lines of text sound bad in English, don't seem natural enough or even contain blatant synthax errors.
Is there a kind soul here who could proofread the English version of the text? I only need someone who can speak good everyday English, even if understanding the original French text would be a plus.
If anyone is interested in helping me, I can of course provide all the translation files.
Thanks in advance!