Ooooh, text adventure! Always love seeing those. ^^ Was fun following along the story and picking between the different options. Also loved the heartbeat SFX that played during gameplay to not be completely silent but also give us a bit of mood. Would love seeing this being expanded with other types of environmental SFX. Also loved the little ending GIF :>

cool lil twine game! i like the setting. and your writing is good. 

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here's a recording of my playthrough:

Very good choice of theme, really wished for more depth on it

Interesting short story! Really enjoyed the theme, atmosphere and wordplay, here. Wish there was more consequence to my choices, but I am a sucker for a happy end, so that was very enjoyable

Very straight forward text adventure with themes of war and morality. Always neat to see a text adventure, and though this one was very barebones, I can appreciate someone experimenting with the genre!

Text adventure, with a very grim war story. The heartbeat sfx is very unsettling, doesn't work well with in-ear headphones. The story seems rather involved, and the pages are a tad too long to be enjoyable to read without knowing more about the lore. It's not always clear how my choice has impacted the conflict and my situation.