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Renpy
Is this your first time making a visual novel?
No
Did you make this solo, or as a team?
Solo
Genre
Horror
Does this contain non-VN game elements? e.g. puzzles, battles, platforming, etc.
No
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I really loved the art! Though it doesn't have sound, I don't know if that's intentional. The dialogs are a little confusing, the character and the player don't get any information or context, so it seems a little rushed. But nice work for doing it solo!
ty a lot for the criticism! i appreciate it a lot🩷
for the lack of music and the weird dialogue - i felt like it'd help with the more oppressive atmosphere i was going for along with the generally confusing situation and the disconnect from reality, though the delivery might've been not so good since yes the game had to be done in a short time period ^^; (I'm planning on working on a longer project to accompany this game and give more context into the events and the characters!!)
also I'm so glad you liked the art!!🩷 there's a bit of a quirky style change between the menu and the main game that i thought would be interesting but I don't really know if it was jarring or not?? dunno if that makes sense
still thank you so so much for playing I really hope you had fun🩷 :))
You did a great job. Keep at it! You get a little better the more you do it. :3