It's such a shame the pictures didn't embed, I'd love to see them at the winddown presentation! The lack of choices until "perfect" and the subtle sound effects really added the experience, great job guys! Very interesting commentary on the creative process as well.

Unfortunately the images did not load for me when I played, but I watched the YouTube video by Gemini so I still was able to see them and they are all really really good. I loved the music as well (though the discord ping in there made me feel like I was going insane). And the story was really good, the idea of perfectionism is something I struggle with and think about a lot. I also enjoy the little detail of what words were the link to the next page. Although I honestly am not sure how this relates to the theme. Overall a very pleasant yet thought provoking experience!

Neat idea! We had some difficulties with images not loading or pages skipping, but the art was really nice when it showed up, and the music was great!