The full text in capital letters made it too hard for me to read, so I skip a lot of reading after a while... v_v but I still broadly understood the story and enjoyed!
It's short but it feels just right... though I didn't read everything.
REALLY cool concept and visuals! i especially love how the options change depending on what you've already been through, that's dope!
it might be worth including a warning about the incest with your cousin; i don't currently see one on the game page's "Content" list
i like how different the designs are for the girls! and how they lean into the bug motif
when you tell your cousin "You're still you", the color of the text is pink as if she said it. most of the player character's dialogue is white, so i thought i'd point this out in case the pink was accidental
the UI is very nice and adds a lot imo
i also really like the Praying Mantis "but that feels like such a waste" line; nice! i was wondering if that would come up, and i'm pleased that it did
it's also neat how you can "Try Again" from where you just were (as opposed to starting the entire story over). it's very convenient for getting all the endings :D
Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback, and I'm glad you liked it.
You're right — I'll add the incest warning. Since the harem tag was already there and it was mentioned in the girl's description that she was your cousin, I thought it would be fine, but I should add it anyway.
Good catch! The "You're still you" was definitely a mistake on my part—thanks!
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Hello! I really love how creative your UI is for a Twine game!
I like the UI! It's juicy.
The full text in capital letters made it too hard for me to read, so I skip a lot of reading after a while... v_v but I still broadly understood the story and enjoyed!
It's short but it feels just right... though I didn't read everything.
The mantis girl nude picture is gorgeous.
I removed the full text in capital letters, I hope it's easier to read now!
hello! here are my thoughts:
great job!
Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback, and I'm glad you liked it.
You're right — I'll add the incest warning. Since the harem tag was already there and it was mentioned in the girl's description that she was your cousin, I thought it would be fine, but I should add it anyway.
Good catch! The "You're still you" was definitely a mistake on my part—thanks!