this was a very funny read and i had a great time with it! i really love the "grow" mechanic (and visual) and how the player had to literally wait 20 seconds for the bus
The story of this game is about waking up from a futuristic capitalistic AI dystopia exploring a bizarre and nonsensical erotic world. There are some grammar mistakes. Sometimes it's hard to tell where the main character is, and things seem to move really fast. Only the "How to Love with Love" choice works. There is expansion content, I think this has to do with penis enlargement and a woman growing in size by eating. Pretty bizarre stuff. It's a funny story; a lot of things don't make any sense, but there are some really interesting moments. My score is 28 cm. Good job overall, but be careful with scope creep, there's a lot going on.
Don't hesitate to point the grammar mistakes out to me if they are too big!
I guess I should be careful with how unusual kinks can look, and with the fact that I easily go off on a tangent. By the way I just have realized I forgot some necessary paragraphes... Maybe I should update ASAP. There is a lot missing, to say so penis enlargement was supposed to be accessory... The other books at the beginning was content missing too.
I am very happy you found 'really interesting moments'! ^^ I wanted to keep tenderness along with eroticism. I hope I did.
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this was a very funny read and i had a great time with it! i really love the "grow" mechanic (and visual) and how the player had to literally wait 20 seconds for the bus
very fun!
It makes me so happy to see people enjoying it! It's one of my first times trying to make games! Thank you! ^^
oh yay!! i hope you continue to make games :D
Hi there! I love how you stylize the choices!
The story of this game is about waking up from a
futuristic capitalistic AI dystopiaexploring a bizarre and nonsensical erotic world.There are some grammar mistakes.
Sometimes it's hard to tell where the main character is, and things seem to move really fast.
Only the "How to Love with Love" choice works.
There is expansion content, I think this has to do with penis enlargement and a woman growing in size by eating. Pretty bizarre stuff.
It's a funny story; a lot of things don't make any sense, but there are some really interesting moments.
My score is 28 cm.
Good job overall, but be careful with scope creep, there's a lot going on.
Don't hesitate to point the grammar mistakes out to me if they are too big!
I guess I should be careful with how unusual kinks can look, and with the fact that I easily go off on a tangent. By the way I just have realized I forgot some necessary paragraphes... Maybe I should update ASAP. There is a lot missing, to say so penis enlargement was supposed to be accessory... The other books at the beginning was content missing too.
I am very happy you found 'really interesting moments'! ^^ I wanted to keep tenderness along with eroticism. I hope I did.