SO COOL! The writing, lore, and creature are amazing. 🤘

This is very well writed. 
Gilded walkin skulls, yesssss. 
"if exposed to fire or extreme heat, they will shriek in agony and begin to tear away at their melting flesh"
Oh yesssss!!!

Ya know, zombies are dead cool...

I'll show myself out.

The writing here is pretty damn good. With just a single paragraph you have outlined what Feldhiem truly is; a gilded hellhole. The adventure hook at the beginning offers a good excuse to shove the players towards Feldhiem. The big star of the show, is the Gilded Undead, or as I like to call it, the shiny zombie. Its a solid example of how you can really add a twist to any mortally challenged locals. Its got a unique gimmick which can be discovered and exploited by players.

I have mixed feelings about the image chosen. On the one hand its a good visual of what Feldhiem would look like, on the other the dark muddy brown does not work well with the starker, brighter colours that surround it. I can't help but wonder if it would have been worth it would have been worth making a black and white (or black and yellow) version of the image via photoshop, GIMP, or whatever image editor you prefer.

Despite this however, I still think Whence the Gold Glitters is solid. You've given us a nice sneak peek into another corner of the wretched world of Mork Borg, and a interesting monster to boot. All in all its a good entry.

Nailed the jam brief. Shining dim light on an unknown corner of the Dying Lands. Plenty grist for the mill. I like the monsters having a weakness. 

Very cool and evocative! I could imagine a crawl down there, finding weird artefacts.

The opening of this is so good. These few short sentences in the beginning say so much with saying so little.