What a kind soul this character is… A bear was encountered. Though ravenous by appearance, it remained docile; a very generous creature indeed. 

You may hallucinate all the villagers to be as handsome as yourself, which is detrimental to their self identities. One may forget which creature claimed to be the “Village Elder” when he looks not a day over twenty. Even a simple name tag would suffice.

I love your world, but it would be great if there were exclamation or question marks to indicate quests.