Not to post spoilers, but when you first go outside to extinguish the blue fire, when I went back in the house it was still raining while inside the house. After I take a bath, I cannot dry myself off on the towel, it just says it is used for later. There is grammatical errors such as after I lock the windows it says, but room too cold now. I will say, a good resource for sounds that can be used to replace the default RPGMaker sounds, mainly the menu effects, (I should've specified), is freesound.org - - - https://freesound.org/

I don't want to clog up the comments section. But DM me on discord, @dantescrypt_15996, or Dante's Crypt on Toasty's Discord. I'll give you more places where there are grammatical errors if you want to fix them in the future. After the contest, though, so you're still in line with the contest rules.