this is so nice, it sounds magical yet emotional, I think you nicely captured the mood I was trying to portray! A beautiful yet tragic love story T-T

This fit the artwork nicely, very much had old-school RPG vibes to it! As others have said, the bells at the start are a bit too loud, but I liked the transition to the more sinister sound at the end. 

I liked your choice of instruments for the song!

Nice work!

The song is sweet and meloncholy.  Transition at 0:55 nails a sinister vibe. The bells are much louder than the rest of the orchestra in the first section.

Nice stylistically classical approach -  which fits the setting well. If I'm following your interpretation, I would say that personally I would have liked to have spent a measure living in the darker key of the middle part of the story before going back for the ending - although I liked the chord progression there. Similarly something more conclusive at the end would have been nice - a held note or something would have been nice.