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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Presentation | #47 | 3.162 | 3.333 |
| Enjoyment | #57 | 2.846 | 3.000 |
| Overall | #70 | 2.793 | 2.944 |
| Concept | #74 | 2.951 | 3.111 |
| Use of the Limitation | #89 | 2.214 | 2.333 |
Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Team members
Oruguin, I downloaded music from Abstraction
Software used
Renpy
Use of the limitation
Part of the dialogue
Cookies eaten
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Comments
Very nice art!
Thank you!
The story is good, But I wish there's more interactive-ness in this...
Thank you for your comment! And for playing, if I update it in the future I'll try to add more interactivity to it
Could have been more interactive, but the art and story is great!
Thank you!
Amazing story, art, and mood. Like the others comments below, I would have loved a little bit more gameplay, or at least interactivity. But it's a greak work nonetheless, and I would be happy if this project was to grow into something a little bit longer.
Thank you for playing! And for your comment, I will try to add more interactivity in future projects, or if/when I update it find a way to add more of it to it
Wow honestly a very captivating story and usually I can't sit through visual novels. But I feel like maybe a little bit of gameplay would have been kinda cool between some scenes.
Thank you! I will try to incorporate more of it in my next project, in general this is my biggest renpy thing so far :u ! But I learned a lot, Im glad you liked the story
This is actually the first visual novel I played to the end (I don't particularly enjoy visual novels tbh). The concept is really interesting and could definitely become a movie or a full-on game. The art-style is also awesome! I think that adding actual gameplay (platforming, fights, exploration, etc.) would make this game even better. Nice work!
Thank you! I'm glad you found it interesting!
Nice art stile, maybe you could have done some more scenes all in all a nice little story game.
Thank you for playing! Where do you need it would need more scenes? At the beginning?