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broken wings - Broken Telephone Jam #10's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Fit | #4 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Overall | #9 | 3.094 | 3.094 |
| Enjoyment | #11 | 3.125 | 3.125 |
| Quality | #11 | 2.875 | 2.875 |
| Creativity | #12 | 2.875 | 2.875 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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this is so nice, it sounds magical yet emotional, I think you nicely captured the mood I was trying to portray! A beautiful yet tragic love story T-T
You're too sweet!! Thank you so much!!
This fit the artwork nicely, very much had old-school RPG vibes to it! As others have said, the bells at the start are a bit too loud, but I liked the transition to the more sinister sound at the end.
Thank you! I actually took inspiration from the Dragon Seeds soundtrack, so that may have bled into the old-school RPG vibes. Haha it's funny that the bells were mentioned because it was something I kept going back to during the composition process (it sounded way too low in its beginning stages) but I'll be more mindful with mastering in the future for sure!
I liked your choice of instruments for the song!
Thank you so much!
Nice work!
Thank you! :)
The song is sweet and meloncholy. Transition at 0:55 nails a sinister vibe. The bells are much louder than the rest of the orchestra in the first section.
Thanks for the comment and for giving this piece a listen! Haha I definitely need to improve my mastering skills some more
Nice stylistically classical approach - which fits the setting well. If I'm following your interpretation, I would say that personally I would have liked to have spent a measure living in the darker key of the middle part of the story before going back for the ending - although I liked the chord progression there. Similarly something more conclusive at the end would have been nice - a held note or something would have been nice.
Yeah, I definitely wish I spent more time with the middle part before it transitions to the end. Hopefully I'll be able to revisit this project next time to do some polishing. Thank you for the comment! I really appreciate the kind words!