I loved this game! Really funny experience and it just surprises me with what you did with the time you used on the project. You killed the vibe, Great job!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Fun | #22 | 3.231 | 3.231 |
| Visuals and Sound | #32 | 3.154 | 3.154 |
| Overall | #33 | 3.103 | 3.103 |
| Creativity and Theme | #44 | 2.923 | 2.923 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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The assets in the 'find the gun' part are a bit samey, and I stuck in the building edges multiple times, and had to restart. A bit more direct guiding would be good also, bc now the player cant even begin to search for the gun. At first I thought that the screen noise is bc I shouldnt go there. The basic concept of the story could be good with enough polish, bc now its more funny than heavy and serious. The destination is good, but the execution is not getting the same emotional response as you may wanted to achieve
The sounds and animations were really funny when grandpa beats you up. I cannot take it seriously lol. The graphics were cool but the walls were kinda off i guess. Idk what the monster is supposed to be apart from like bendy x something idk. Idk how he time travelled and also I wished there were npcs and stuff around while you were looking for the gun or something. Whatever, funny game.
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Wish Grantedit's a complete arthouse, the game from the first seconds in you throws a story that pulls on Indian movies, but the gameplay is extremely simple, like "go there, take this, bring this", but it's a classic for such games. The visual style is very hip, kinda like the ps1 vibe, but I don't think Sony wrote such a brilliant story. also, i want to point out that all the characters in this game are 18 years old, all the actions shown are NOT RECOMMENDED to be repeated. :)
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echanceWow. GREAT PSX style, you nailed it. I also love big timmy's spin kick XD Also, I just noticed, big Timmy and little Timmy..
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