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A jam submission

All Aboard the Loop Line Express!View game page

Pick up passengers, complete loops, rack up points.
Submitted by aragon789 — 1 hour, 13 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Enjoyment#22673.3203.320
Creativity#26843.5603.560
Audio#34512.8802.880
Artwork#39503.0003.000
Narrative#39532.3202.320

Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
You control a train that travels around a circular track, creating a gameplay loop of picking up passengers, delivering them to stations around the track, and earning points. You gain bonus points by doing loops, and loops are counted as a separate score when the game ends.

(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
Font Jersey15 by Sarah Cadigan-Fried

(Optional) What would you like to be called if GMTK features your game?
Filip Kraus

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Man don't you hate it when the trains already full and they just blow past your station? 
Fun bit of game here, I really found myself thinking ahead and then sweating getting the next stop, two signs that I was engaged and interested! Thanks so much for sharing :D

Submitted(+1)

pretty cool. Congrats. Nice simple game play loop. Very polished. Impressed how you basically blended the game with the page. Rarely see that. It looked cool but it actually made it more intuitive in some way.  I am still not good though. I keep getting speed burnouts :) (Smart idea too).  Solid

Submitted(+1)

Great job on submitting, I'm a huge fan of how tight this game is concept and gameplay wise. I think for me it's missing something, I didn't find a lot of interesting decisions to make most of the time but other comments suggest I'm wrong, so maybe it's just not my cup of tea.

Again though, great job, it comes across like a very polished demo, which is saying a lot given the time span everyone had to work with

Submitted(+1)

I love the board game feeling of this and the flow of gameplay. I think the area of drop off/pick up is a bit tight. Otherwise, no notes!

Submitted(+1)

Cute little endless game! Could see this working well on mobile. Well done!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

This is a really relaxing game!  I love the interpretation of the theme, the art is cute, and it's really pleasant to listen to you have great sound effects.  I think this is a perfectly scoped and executed jam game. 

I think the only way I'd suggest improving on this game would be just to give it a little more polish.  Maybe some calming music, a sound effect when the train stops in place to pick up passengers.  There was a tiny learning curve finding how how much leeway you got on getting the train into the stop.  A small sound effect or visual cue that you got it right would be satisfying.  

Awesome job!


Developer

Thank you for taking the time to play my game and writing such an extensive review!

I can only but agree that the game is a bit rough around the edges. I had a list of things I wanted to include in the game, including some music, but I didn't schedule my time correctly. :D 

Thank you for the feedback about stopping at stations! That is something that has not crossed my mind, but I do see how it can be a bit hard for a new player. 

Thank you for playing!

Submitted

Really enjoyed it! it was a bit of a challenge! My shift ended and got 1.400.000!! 
At some point it said x1 next to the score but did not understand why exactly and how I could get a bigger multiplier.

Either way, really cool game and great implementation of the theme! 

Great Job!

Developer (2 edits) (+1)

Thanks for playing! The 1x is an extension of the basic score counter - it is meant to symbolize one "overflow" (but let's call it a loop) of the score. :D You can reach a higher multiplier by simply achieving score 2 000 000 and so on. 

Thanks for playing once more. 

Submitted

Oh I get you! 

Submitted(+1)

Super creative idea

Submitted(+1)

Fire! I first there was a dominant strategy of just going in circle and stopping on every stop, but I was ultimately false.

Submitted(+1)

Fun and creative. Reminded me of Mini Metro but with a manual train instead of building automatic tracks.

Developer

Thank you for playing! I actually did take some inspiration from Mini Metro, glad it is noticeable!