The art and music are very pretty! I like the concept too, it just needs a bit more strategic depth. Perhaps a penalty for missing the station. Currently the most optimal strategy for a longer train is just walking over the whole thing while spamming stamp. In any case, congrats!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #158 | 4.080 | 4.080 |
| Artwork | #536 | 4.200 | 4.200 |
| Narrative | #549 | 3.600 | 3.600 |
| Creativity | #764 | 4.080 | 4.080 |
| Enjoyment | #2118 | 3.360 | 3.360 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
The train is on a looped track, cycling around to each station.
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Comments
What a lovely game, I also really like the circular parralax effect. We would need a sprint after 10 train cars because you almost got no time to go from one side to the other end.
really nice sound track and the souls are in a better place now. Maybe the real soul were the treasure we found along the way!
Really unique and meditative ! The art is great, the sound design immersive and there is a story too (which I see for the first time in this year's GMTK game jam) ! I appreciated the incentive to stamp the tickets in the center, so the player has at least a little challenge in a contemplative game :)
Really lovely, the art and music coming together to create such a wonderful cozy atmosphere. A lot of beauty here.
Oupsi daisy, my loco got a little problem (the front part near the wheels vanished) ! I liked a lot your game, just a bit dissapointed, i didn't get much to admire in the environnement to fullfill my train controller journey. Overall, your game is really great and i liked a lot to do about Three loops around the stations ! This was a relaxing moment
Clean game! The best art I've seen so far. My only criticism is that the game a little too simple, to the point where it gets repetetive.
good simple game :) do his job ! almost loffy.
the grass in front of the train might have been a bit lower :p
+1 for the simplicity and the art !
good simple game :) do his job ! almost loffy.
the grass in front of the train might have been a bit lower :p
+1 for the simplicity and the art !
Wow what a gorgeous game! The 3d perspective for the background elements is really neat looking. Solid gameplay, but it took a while to really figure out what I should be doing, especially "advanced" techniques like going faster by standing at the front, or skipping tickets that are not immediately coming up. I think just a few pacing tweaks would go a long way. Really enjoyed this one!



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