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Static Train's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Best Gameplay | #7 | 3.286 | 3.600 |
| Best Storyline | #11 | 3.104 | 3.400 |
| Best Visuals | #12 | 3.651 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Hey! Great job on participating & submitting your game to the jam ^_^
Here’s my humble feedback:
What I liked: I couldn't play as it need extra downloads but I'm impressed that this is done in Roblox engine! loved the mechanics and visual effects, not sure how much of it is ready to use in Roblox engine but well done!
What could be improved: More depth to the store and background story, i felt lost watching the video, nice puzzles but it was basic puzzles that can be found in many other games.
Overall impression: Impressed but it felt more like a tech demo.
thanks a lot I really appreciate you taking the time to watch the video and give feedback!
I actually had more complex puzzles planned but the erbil site leader recommended that puzzles be kept simple so the judges could finish the game easily. even with simpler puzzles people typically took about 20–35 minutes to solve them.
I left out the full story on purpose so I wouldnt spoil the experience, I wanted players to discover the plot themselves while exploring. For example a door closing as you enter the last segment of the train or when you leave an area, footsteps on the roof, or the sound of objects falling combined with a small jumpscare, these sounds and events are not mentioned in the story so players can notice them while playing. I will try to add more depth to the story by including some backstory and details.
none of the assets are ready to use in Roblox Studio. I downloaded free 3D models from sites like sketchfab and added them to roblox engine. many ready made assets in roblox make the game look worse so I didn't use them.
Thanks again for the kind words and the critique I really appreciated it!
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thanks a lot! im glad you liked the vibe of the game
the best game i see here my rate about system
- Movement system 10/10
- Objective system 8.5/10
- Left and right-hand interaction system 10/10
- Left and right-hand interaction system 11/10
- First-person system 6/10
- Advanced camera system 7/10
- Advanced audio system 10/10
- Puzzle system 5/10
- Crouching system 10/10
- Lever system for puzzles 10/10
- Footsteps sound system 9/10
i hope game win
thank you for testing and for the feedback!