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I died at the end 😂

You made me laugh. Good job.

Now that was good fun! I like how you break the fourth wall a little bit. The story as a whole lacks a little bit of cohesion, at times I wasn't sure whether to take this seriously or not. Made me chuckle more than once though. Nice work!

I like how you’re breaking up the universe a little bit. 40k got stuck in a sausage hole. Yes there are females in that universe but  Warhammer 40k contains a total of 6 personalities in the whole universe (that’s being generous) and about 8 are male humans doing the exact same thing in the exact same ways just with minor variations. As much as this story might be peeking into the abyss of furry fantasy. I appreciate what you’ve done and I hope you keep doing it.

Nice work!

Interesting.

Good job, it's unique

I feel like I was forced to read furry fanfic. Great job. I am not a hater

I enjoyed this story immensely. It's so much fun. I mean, it probably shouldn't win the jam but please keep doing stuff like this.