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Great voice. The characters come out well. 

It's a bit like Pinky and the Brain with Goblins, except they are both Pinky - nice!

Govlina with character.  That's fun.  Thanks for the good read!

That was a fun read. Great job. So much character in the goblins. You say you've written about them before, and it shows. 

Nice Job! Goblins are always fun

The banter in this submission is top notch. I love how you can immediately feel the dynamic between the two characters, as if this is only a excerpt from a much larger story.

Fun story - the characters are very likeable. I like the imagination and creativity.