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No prayer for the greenskin's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #37 | 2.692 | 2.692 |
| Concepts & Originality | #39 | 3.192 | 3.192 |
| Overall | #45 | 2.692 | 2.692 |
| Flow & Clarity | #46 | 2.192 | 2.192 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This is a complicated one for me.
Taking note of the accident with the copy paste and not moving my rating around too much on it, I still found a few misspellings and grammatical errors.
The story was good, but with too little explanation: I didn’t know whose story I was following.
Overall I still really liked it, but it definitely needed another draft.
Thank you! Yes the editing got stressed… but i am pleased with the result. Regarding ”too little of explanation”, yes i think so too,hehe. If i had more time…
That was great! Really capturing the hollowness of victory through destruction. The ending felt a little rushed perhaps, after you gave your character so much space to ponder the destruction of everything. Apart from that the shortness of your story is a good feature, actually, I feel like as a reader my time is being treated as valuable. I like it.
Thank you very much for those words! :)
Good job
Thank you
Good effort! Sorry you weren't able to catch the copy and paste in time for the submission but still a fun read!
Good suspense and story line. I enjoyed it!
Thank you very much!
I really enjoyed your story the only thing I would say is that you accidently copied a whole section twice and am wondering if you will still make word count without the extra copy.
yes i realised this when it was too late… got stressed..
This is a really gripping and emotional story! You did a great job building everything with a slow burn and a believable change of heart. The editing errors interrupted the pace pretty badly but I really really liked this submission
Thanx! Yes i had some problems with the editions and translators some words. But i am glad i made it :)