Play book
THE TORCH OF HOPE's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #42 | 2.417 | 2.417 |
| Concepts & Originality | #46 | 2.917 | 2.917 |
| Overall | #47 | 2.333 | 2.333 |
| Flow & Clarity | #48 | 1.667 | 1.667 |
Ranked from 24 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This one needed some editing passes. It was difficult to read. You have an interesting idea though.
Thank you I am new to this but I will try to improve in future
Cool concept, could have been improved by some careful proofreading. Good job!
Thank you I will improve in future
Creative
Thank you author of dog star blues
Great in concept and pacing, fascinating idea presenting it as a script; unfortunately it’s dragged down some by the grammar. Had to reread a few times to understand some of it.
Overall enjoyed it; just wish it had more editing.
New to this, thank you for pointing out what you experienced. next time I will keep an eye for not doing the same errors ,Thank you .
Very interesting!
Thank you haningc
Really cool premise! I like the idea of some robotic cosmic being hosting the games, and I think that a detached, mechanical style to the narrative could work really well! I feel I am a bit lost in this one though; it might have worked better for me with a bit more polish, as I found the shifts in perspective and style very confusing. I'd definitely want to see this premise sculpted further!
Thank you I'm new to this and your comments means more to me thanks you again for pointing out error and giving suggestions i will try to reach your expectations in future
very original work. Think it could use a little refinement but it is an interesting story for sure.
very original work. Think it could use a little refinement but it is an interesting story for sure.
Thank you, it's my first time I will reach your expectations next time.
Nice!
Thank you Aaron.lollar