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A fun and funny story! Rare to capture humor well in such a short form and in a fantasy setting. You definitely need a couple more editing passes, that hurt the readability.  But it was still a fun read. 

It's a fun story.

This story was a fun read. It's nice having a more comedic story told like a campfire tale or gossip with a coworker or friend. May the legend of Colonel Strum live on!

That was very funny, I love the characterisation of the colonel! Some of your sentences could have been shortened or separated, it can be a lot to process in such a short story. The last paragraph is my favourite, it's to the point and neatly ties it all up. Great work!

This was a very fun story - the language could have been tighter but you only get 48 hours, right? I enjoyed it a lot.

Very much enjoyed the idea that this is why the platform is now widely used. Good job. 

Great command of lore, wonderful incorporation of cheese. 

Very fun folktale! I very much enjoy well written stories like this that tie in the lore to the game