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Point Blank Negotiations Writing Jam #13's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #34 | 3.080 | 3.080 |
| Concepts & Originality | #35 | 3.440 | 3.440 |
| Adherence to Theme | #38 | 2.680 | 2.680 |
| Overall | #39 | 3.067 | 3.067 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Orcs and DAO are just so cute together. Great story!
A fun romp for sure.
Other than some grammatical errors, my only real problem was that I couldn’t see a clear connection to the theme.
Great work. Flows well.
I think it can be all too tempting to fall into the GW style of Cockney football hooligan orks, so I'm always happy when someone writes them in a more novel way.
Definitely agree with others about breaking up your paragraphs. That being said I think this story absolutely captures what OPR is going for with their new Orc direction. Great job!
Really enjoyed this one - loved the twist at the end very Ta- I mean Dao.
Only comment really is that I think breaking up the paragraphs would make this much easier to read, and there should probably be some sort of denotation of break between the negotiations and combat!
Really enjoyed this one - loved the twist at the end very Ta- I mean Dao.
Only comment really is that I think breaking up the paragraphs would make this much easier to read, and there should probably be some sort of denotation of break between the negotiations and combat!
very well written. I enjoyed the level of sass displayed by your orcs. Was very entertaining. The only thing I would say is that some of the text in the middle became a bit overwhelming because of the lack of paragraph breaks. Otherwise excellent job!