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Great work

Nice! Well done.

As already stated by others,I enjoyed the way you conveyed the brainwashed mindset, trivialising the bloodshed as "just another day at the office". However, I will echo the other comment here in saying the theme felt a little tagged on at the end. I don't like offering changes to others' works, but I do think with a few tweaks, you could have made it fit better.  Otherwise, you convey the Battle Brothers narrative well, and I enjoyed reading it. 

That was a great read, it made me curious where our Brother would go. The transition between introspection and action can be a little jarring at times but I also like how it somewhat trivialises the killing, to our protagonist it's just another Tuesday. Sadly, the theme felt a little forced at the end but it's a very compelling narrative nonetheless.