Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

• The GDD is good but would benefit from a more detailed explanation of the mechanics, along with images or concept art to give context to the art direction. If royalty-free noir music was sourced online, be sure to credit it either in the game or the GDD — it’s good etiquette. The sound effects section is currently blank, and adding to it would make the document more complete. The development timeline section is enjoyable, and while there’s always more to learn in a game jam, the effort you put in truly counts. I appreciate that you acknowledged the missing menu and settings in the debrief, and crediting the dialogue manager was a great touch. For the web version, the need for players to click into the game to fully enable the camera mouse function is worth noting. The multiple endings are a strong point, and there’s something special in the atmosphere you’ve created in the game, and maybe not necessarily the same art style, but the overall vibe is worth keeping and polishing further.