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Absolutely gripping! A truly unique tale and well told.

Clear and well written. Nice dark tone. I enjoyed it. 

Nice and dark, I like it. A few word repetitions here and there, lots of sentences starting with "his" but that's pretty minor. I like the way the story is bisected by the big bold "Bio-Breach Detected". Honestly one of my favourites so far.

Great story. Fits perfectly into the OPR universe. There were a couple of moments I was uncertain who the subject of a sentence was, but that's nitpicky.  Good job. 

Horror and sci-fi! Yes please!

Horror and sci-fi! Yes please!

Very grimly fun. I like the tragic ending.

Ooh that was good!

Ooh that was good!

This story packed a lot into the one-page limit, and you managed to do it without feeling cramped or rushed. The description of Oscar getting infected, and how it feels from his already not-quite-human perspective, was a real highlight for me.

I like this. Good Plaguery. Couple typos, but otherwise not much to fault at all. 

woah love this. Not many people wrote about the plague. I enjoyed your description of the body and the parasite.

It is a really grim story. I think suits well the Grimadark Future aura.