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Human No Longer - OPR Writing Jam #13's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #5 | 4.125 | 4.125 |
| Overall | #13 | 3.694 | 3.694 |
| Flow & Clarity | #17 | 3.625 | 3.625 |
| Adherence to Theme | #23 | 3.333 | 3.333 |
Ranked from 24 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Absolutely gripping! A truly unique tale and well told.
Clear and well written. Nice dark tone. I enjoyed it.
Nice and dark, I like it. A few word repetitions here and there, lots of sentences starting with "his" but that's pretty minor. I like the way the story is bisected by the big bold "Bio-Breach Detected". Honestly one of my favourites so far.
Great story. Fits perfectly into the OPR universe. There were a couple of moments I was uncertain who the subject of a sentence was, but that's nitpicky. Good job.
Horror and sci-fi! Yes please!
Horror and sci-fi! Yes please!
Very grimly fun. I like the tragic ending.
Ooh that was good!
Ooh that was good!
This story packed a lot into the one-page limit, and you managed to do it without feeling cramped or rushed. The description of Oscar getting infected, and how it feels from his already not-quite-human perspective, was a real highlight for me.
I like this. Good Plaguery. Couple typos, but otherwise not much to fault at all.
woah love this. Not many people wrote about the plague. I enjoyed your description of the body and the parasite.
It is a really grim story. I think suits well the Grimadark Future aura.