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Dwarven 'Precision''s itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #8 | 3.831 | 3.913 |
| Overall | #17 | 3.604 | 3.681 |
| Flow & Clarity | #24 | 3.448 | 3.522 |
| Concepts & Originality | #32 | 3.533 | 3.609 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
I think you did an amazing job capturing each characters voice without over doing it. I could clearly tell who was speaking just by their tone and word choice. Nice work!
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Seekers in the JungleI enjoyed this. I think if you added a few more characters, you could have a Guardians of the Galaxy in OPR vibe going pretty easily. It made me think about all the people teaming up in small spaces that aren't battle zones all the time. Well done.
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The Wisdom of ViolenceMy submission was written as a continuation for Unsanctioned Percussive Maintenance that I wrote for one of the OPR Jams before. Save that Unas was an Eternal back then, and his actions during the Dark Elf Boarding in Unsanctioned Percussive Maintenance earned him elevation to Technomancer and a name. I wanted to note that one of his arm plates is from his time as an Eternal and bears hammer marks from Hrothgar's hammer. But there are only so many words I'm allowed. Maybe some day I can write a full manuscript and give it to Tano.
This was a fun one. I enjoyed the interactions between the two characters and it's left me wanting to know more about how the two came to be working together.
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Lessons in HubrisReally great development of the theme across such little time. Final line is a quality payoff.
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The Partheir's Host
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