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Narrative is good and I could the picture the game

I'll have to play this. 

Ha! I love the way you just created a campaign. I want to play this so bad.

Wow, what a captivating opener! It's great exposition, though it doesn't develop into much of a story, more of a setup. Still, it's an interesting, literal take on the theme and for that alone I got to give points. Kudos!