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Wonderful set piece for such a tale. Some of the action was a bit confusing, and I’m still left wondering where the theme connects.

Other than that, I heartily enjoyed it.

Thanks for sharing the story. Good luck on the Jam!

Oh how delightfully macabre! I noticed a few repetitions of "as" and "again" but overall well-written and oozing with style. Great story!

I enjoyed this. Great work!

This is great. Very clear and evocative. 

Loved this, especially the oblique description of the violence. Poor Marie :(

This is solid grimdark fiction. I would read more of it if I could.

Enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing!

wow the description of your characters is so clear. I could totally imagine this being a short video with minis. Good Job!

Grimdark confusion is one of my safest spaces, very well executed mysterious mad scientist! 

Nice!